Utopia is nothing but a book.

Monday, July 18, 2005

Selfless


There's a difference present,
When many minds and heart collide,
Who sees what the other sees?
So fickle we are - we believe to know all,
We know your mind,
We know your feelings,
My empathy towards you is beyond your experience,
Arrogant and smiling,
We want what we want and nothing more,
Satisfying ourselves with words like selfless and caring,
Modest and passionate,
Compassionate and aesthetic,
Sentimental,
So sentimental,
Priceless hypocrisy,
We swell in our prides and ego like birds afraid,
"You shall not know what I want",
Our needs as unknown as faith,
Our power as unlimited as gods,
Conflict?
Our wisdom insignificant,
A child born - a child dead,
Fickle morals,
Fickle,
Fickle minds,
This conflict and hypocrisy in me undefined and multifaceted
Where will we find,
Peace unsurpassed,
And beyond words to undermine...

4 Comments:

Blogger N/A said...

i'm like the biggest critic when it comes to writing but i have to ask, why would u call this crap? its amazingly put.. i love the word choice (so sentimental/priceless hypocrisy) and the images are very real, i can feel them.. definately has more depth than the credit u give to it.. keep writing

1:00 PM  
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5:52 AM  
Blogger Nuriko said...

Hey, you linked my blog to yours! Thanks! :D

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